add a bit more about dungeons

stories/decentralized mmo.html

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     <h2 id="introduction">Introduction</h2>
     <p>
-        Back in my childhood I used to play quite the amount of MMORPGs(mostly because they were free, but also because they were online).<br>
+        Back in my childhood I used to play quite the amount of MMORPGs (mostly because they were free, but also because they were online).<br>
         The more time passed, the less MMORPGs I got to play, most of the good options were either shut down 
-        or got SUCH a power creep I lost interest in them(like MapleStory when they started adding a lot of overpowered classes).
+        or got SUCH a power creep I lost interest in them (like MapleStory when they started adding a lot of overpowered classes).
     </p>
     <p>
         As an aspiring game developer, I hope to one day attempt making my own MMORPG, and something which is (sort of) important to me
@@ -25,10 +25,10 @@
     <hr/>
     <h2 id="why make a decentralized mmo tho?">Why make a decentralized MMO tho?</h2>
     <p>
-        Well, you see, whenever I look for alternatives to big centralized services(like Github or social medias),
+        Well, you see, whenever I look for alternatives to big centralized services (like Github or social medias),
         it always seems to me that the best choice is to decentralize and federate it.<br> That way, anyone can create their own instance
         and not miss out on everyone else, allowing both greater control to the individual, while also sharing the costs between those
-        who host their own(and those who decide to donate them).<br>
+        who host their own (and those who decide to donate them).<br>
     </p>
     <p>
         Besides, there are some useful advantages to federating a bunch of servers in an MMO which will hopefully become clearer later on. 
@@ -38,25 +38,29 @@
     <p>
         Mainly, there will be 2 different types of servers:
         <ul>
-            <li><a href="#hubs">Hubs(or Home servers)</a> - Home servers you can register on and play with everyone else</li>
-            <li><a href="#dungeons">Dungeons(or Nodes)</a></li>
+            <li><a href="#hubs">Hubs (or Home servers)</a> - Home servers you can register on and play with everyone else</li>
+            <li><a href="#dungeons">Dungeons (or Nodes)</a></li>
         </ul>
     </p>
     <hr/>
     <h2 id="a note going forward">A note going forward</h2>
     <p>
         My idea of decentralized/federated MMO involves quite the amount of trust,
-        trust between federating servers(federation will be opt in to allow greater control over gameplay),
-        and trusting clients to not lie when they go into a dungeon. 
+        trust between federating servers (federation will be opt in to allow greater control over gameplay),
+        and trusting clients to not lie when they go into a dungeon.
+    </p>
+    <p>
+        Another thing is, while I do wish I could implement this idea into an actual MMORPG, this is merely an idea right now,
+        if you want to implement this idea into your game, feel free to do so (and maybe link here as well).
     </p>
     <hr/>
     <h2 id="hubs">Hubs</h2>
     <p>
-        Hubs(or Home servers) are the main servers of the network, they are the main authority over your account.
+        Hubs (or Home servers) are the main servers of the network, they are the main authority over your account.
     </p>
     <p>
-        Hubs have an overworld with stuff to do(or maybe not), and where you meet other players and can make parties,
-        communicate with others, trade and all the usual stuff people do in MMOs(like a dance party).
+        Hubs have an overworld with stuff to do (or maybe not), and where you meet other players and can make parties,
+        communicate with others, trade and all the usual stuff people do in MMOs (like a dance party).
     </p>
     <p>
         Federation between hubs is a 2 way opt in federation, which means both servers need to accept the federation for the federation to exist
@@ -71,12 +75,14 @@
     <hr/>
     <h2 id="dungeons">Dungeons</h2>
     <p>
-        Dungeons(or Nodes/Edges) are sub-servers, they are simply a dungeon/map for a party to explore/play in,
-        and should be where most of the game content occur.
+        Dungeons (or Nodes/Edges) are sub-servers, they are simply a dungeon/map for a party to explore/play in,
+        and should be where most of the game content occur, 
+        they are hosted by whoever wants to and are technically simply a level (plus some game data in addition, though they are part of the level)
+        with an end condition (or fail condition) and a reward. 
     </p>
     <p>
-        Dungeons dont federate with each other(and technically dont federate at all), but hubs can link/federate(one way) to them and allow their
-        players to go into a dungeon and get the rewards from it(or optionally, modify the rewards to better fit the server).
+        Dungeons dont federate with each other (and technically dont federate at all), but hubs can link/federate (one way) to them and allow their
+        players to go into a dungeon and get the rewards from it (or optionally, modify the rewards to better fit the server).
     </p>
     <p>
         Dungeons occur in private instances available only to the exploring party. 
@@ -86,7 +92,7 @@
     <p>
         <h3 id="quick note on dungeons">Quick note on dungeons</h3>
         Although dungeons usually get linked to from hub servers, it is also possible to allow dungeons to be played even if they are not linked,
-        thus allowing players to play all dungeons, but it means non-linked dungeons will give no actual reward(or anything at all). 
+        thus allowing players to play all dungeons, but it means non-linked dungeons will give no actual reward (or anything at all). 
     </p>
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